Puyo Puyo Sonnet

So I had to do this for a class, and I like how it turned out, so here it is:
Amitie and Arle popping puyos,
Lemres and Schezo Coming along to play,
The two mages were an A-plus duo,
Schezos arrival made Arle shout "Hey!"

A fight was a-brewing in Primp today,
Lemres and Amitie knew it had to stop,
Lemres said calm, "Now now, let's play nice, okay?",
Amite went and tripped with a big 'Thwomp!'

The fall had worked, it brought Arle to halt,
She checked her friend, Schezos not worth worry,
Lemres started craving a chocolate malt,
But Arle wanted some spicy curry...

They bought some candy and went on their way,
The diner, where curry lays, if they pay!

So, yeah. That happened. Thoughts, anyone? And this is something I wrote along with it:
So that was a bit of rubbish I concocted while in class. I actually rather like it, because it expresses the relationships between characters, like how Arle dislikes Schezo, and Lemres is liked by everyone, and things like how Amitie can solve problems by being her little ol' 'blond' (klutzy, head in the clouds, etc.) self, and how Schezo doesn't always have to be a perv, and that Lemres LOVES candy, and Arle LOVES curry. I also find it funny I was able to do a whole puyo puyo poem without a real puyo battle occuring, only one mentioned in the begining. It was fun just using an array of 100+ characters, picking 4, and making a story with them all in whatever way I please. The fact that it had to be a sonnet troubled my a bit, but it kind of workied out to make it better, but no promisses on the 10 syllable rule, THAT was troublesome. But either way, I got it done, and here we are! I did this for a class, but I might have done it otherwise if I felt like it.

In that end bit there may be some spelling and grammar errors, don't blame me, blame laggy word online!

IceCreeper909 wrote:So I had to do this for a class, and I like how it turned out, so here it is:
Amitie and Arle popping puyos,  
Lemres and Schezo Coming along to play,  
The two mages were an A-plus duo,  
Schezos arrival made Arle shout "Hey!"  

A fight was a-brewing in Primp today,  
Lemres and Amitie knew it had to stop,  
Lemres said calm, "Now now, let's play nice, okay?",  
Amite went and tripped with a big 'Thwomp!'  

The fall had worked, it brought Arle to halt,  
She checked her friend, Schezos not worth worry,  
Lemres started craving a chocolate malt,  
But Arle wanted some spicy curry...  

They bought some candy and went on their way,  
The diner, where curry lays, if they pay!

So, yeah. That happened. Thoughts, anyone? And this is something I wrote along with it:
So that was a bit of rubbish I concocted while in class. I actually rather like it, because it expresses the relationships between characters, like how Arle dislikes Schezo, and Lemres is liked by everyone, and things like how Amitie can solve problems by being her little ol' 'blond' (klutzy, head in the clouds, etc.) self, and how Schezo doesn't always have to be a perv, and that Lemres LOVES candy, and Arle LOVES curry. I also find it funny I was able to do a whole puyo puyo poem without a real puyo battle occuring, only one mentioned in the begining. It was fun just using an array of 100+ characters, picking 4, and making a story with them all in whatever way I please. The fact that it had to be a sonnet troubled my a bit, but it kind of workied out to make it better, but no promisses on the 10 syllable rule, THAT was troublesome. But either way, I got it done, and here we are! I did this for a class, but I might have done it otherwise if I felt like it.

cool

Good job on the sonnet.