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eanthesasoriman 500 wrote:At least this topic isn't dead!
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Well, good thing that we can continue the story there.
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Mon Feb 19, 2018 2:23 am
Okay then, PuyoSturm, I'm Gonna do Ecolo's Story now, We can continue on.

Ecolo's Story - Stage 1 - Ecolo vs Maguro - Suzaran school, Chemistry club

Ecolo: Hiya Ringie!

Maguro: AAAAH!

Ecolo: ...Ringo Isn't at the club.

Maguro: Sorry, But Is there Something you want to her, I won't tell until you find a reason.

Ecolo: ...

Maguro: Hm, What's the matter?

Ecolo: I have a feeling that I hate you so much that I want you to die because you are getting closer to Ringo.

Maguro: Well, We are childhood friends, So of course we are the closest.

Ecolo: No excuses! Because you are getting closer to Ringo that means Ringo's in danger, Or she is on another castle because of you.

Maguro: What?

Ecolo: Time to settle all of this, You no-eyes-head guy!

After the match

Maguro: Well, I got no choice but to say it.

Maguro: Ringo Is diseased today, So she couldn't go to the school.

Ecolo: ...diseased?

Maguro: Well, I'm gonna head Home today, Please don't bother her so much.

Ecolo: Hm... She is diseased...

Ecolo: I don't know what's diseased all about, But I'm gonna save her from the disease!

Ecolo: That'll be so fun!
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Mon Feb 19, 2018 3:51 am
YukaPuyo wrote:Okay then, PuyoSturm, I'm Gonna do Ecolo's Story now, We can continue on.

Ecolo's Story - Stage 1 - Ecolo vs Maguro - Suzaran school, Chemistry club

Ecolo: Hiya Ringie!

Maguro: AAAAH!

Ecolo: ...Ringo Isn't at the club.

Maguro: Sorry, But Is there Something you want to her, I won't tell until you find a reason.

Ecolo: ...

Maguro: Hm, What's the matter?

Ecolo: I have a feeling that I hate you so much that I want you to die because you are getting closer to Ringo.

Maguro: Well, We are childhood friends, So of course we are the closest.

Ecolo: No excuses! Because you are getting closer to Ringo that means Ringo's in danger, Or she is on another castle because of you.

Maguro: What?

Ecolo: Time to settle all of this, You no-eyes-head guy!

After the match

Maguro: Well, I got no choice but to say it.

Maguro: Ringo Is diseased today, So she couldn't go to the school.

Ecolo: ...diseased?

Maguro: Well, I'm gonna head Home today, Please don't bother her so much.

Ecolo: Hm... She is diseased...

Ecolo: I don't know what's diseased all about, But I'm gonna save her from the disease!

Ecolo: That'll be so fun!

Excellent work, YukaPuyo. I probably won't post as frequently as while we were on Puyo Nexus because of my status as a moderator and admin here, but I will try to at least post something story-wise once a month to once a week depending on how my muse is feeling.
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Mon Feb 19, 2018 5:28 am
PuyoSturm wrote:
YukaPuyo wrote:Okay then, PuyoSturm, I'm Gonna do Ecolo's Story now, We can continue on.

Ecolo's Story - Stage 1 - Ecolo vs Maguro - Suzaran school, Chemistry club

Ecolo: Hiya Ringie!

Maguro: AAAAH!

Ecolo: ...Ringo Isn't at the club.

Maguro: Sorry, But Is there Something you want to her, I won't tell until you find a reason.

Ecolo: ...

Maguro: Hm, What's the matter?

Ecolo: I have a feeling that I hate you so much that I want you to die because you are getting closer to Ringo.

Maguro: Well, We are childhood friends, So of course we are the closest.

Ecolo: No excuses! Because you are getting closer to Ringo that means Ringo's in danger, Or she is on another castle because of you.

Maguro: What?

Ecolo: Time to settle all of this, You no-eyes-head guy!

After the match

Maguro: Well, I got no choice but to say it.

Maguro: Ringo Is diseased today, So she couldn't go to the school.

Ecolo: ...diseased?

Maguro: Well, I'm gonna head Home today, Please don't bother her so much.

Ecolo: Hm... She is diseased...

Ecolo: I don't know what's diseased all about, But I'm gonna save her from the disease!

Ecolo: That'll be so fun!

Excellent work, YukaPuyo. I probably won't post as frequently as while we were on Puyo Nexus because of my status as a moderator and admin here, but I will try to at least post something story-wise once a month to once a week depending on how my muse is feeling.
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Ecolo's Story Stage 2 - Ecolo Vs Ringo - Ringo's Room.

Ringo: *Cough* *Cough* This isn't good at all...

Ecolo: Hiya Ringie, I came here for the rescue.

Ringo: *Screaming that never saw it screaming, but it is low screaming anyhow* What are you doing here?

Ecolo: Here for to rescue you from that disease curse you have!

Ringo:...

Ringo: No thanks...

Ecolo: B-But...

Ringo: Look, If you are here just to play, I don't have time for that, I need to rest, and look, I'm ill!

Ringo: *Cough* *Crough* *Sniff* *AACCHOOO* (And these words can't be described enough.

Ecolo: Maybe Having some Puyo match will get you better.

Ringo: Wait, what?! I didn't agree to this!

After the fight

Ringo: *Sniff* *Sniff* Ecolo... Get out of my room. *Sniff*

Ecolo: huh? why exactly?

Ringo: Because I'm gonna be sick more...

Ringo: *AAACHOOOOO*

Ecolo: ...I better leave...
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YukaPuyo wrote:Ecolo's Story Stage 2 - Ecolo Vs Ringo - Ringo's Room.

Ringo: *Cough* *Cough* This isn't good at all...

Ecolo: Hiya Ringie, I came here for the rescue.

Ringo: *Screaming that never saw it screaming, but it is low screaming anyhow* What are you doing here?

Ecolo: Here for to rescue you from that disease curse you have!

Ringo:...

Ringo: No thanks...

Ecolo: B-But...

Ringo: Look, If you are here just to play, I don't have time for that, I need to rest, and look, I'm ill!

Ringo: *Cough* *Crough* *Sniff* *AACCHOOO* (And these words can't be described enough.

Ecolo: Maybe  Having some Puyo match will get you better.

Ringo: Wait, what?! I didn't agree to this!

After the fight

Ringo: *Sniff* *Sniff* Ecolo... Get out of my room. *Sniff*

Ecolo: huh? why exactly?

Ringo: Because I'm gonna be sick more...

Ringo: *AAACHOOOOO*

Ecolo: ...I better leave...

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YukaPuyo wrote:Ecolo's Story Stage 2 - Ecolo Vs Ringo - Ringo's Room.

Ringo: *Cough* *Cough* This isn't good at all...

Ecolo: Hiya Ringie, I came here for the rescue.

Ringo: *Screaming that never saw it screaming, but it is low screaming anyhow* What are you doing here?

Ecolo: Here for to rescue you from that disease curse you have!

Ringo:...

Ringo: No thanks...

Ecolo: B-But...

Ringo: Look, If you are here just to play, I don't have time for that, I need to rest, and look, I'm ill!

Ringo: *Cough* *Crough* *Sniff* *AACCHOOO* (And these words can't be described enough.

Ecolo: Maybe  Having some Puyo match will get you better.

Ringo: Wait, what?! I didn't agree to this!

After the fight

Ringo: *Sniff* *Sniff* Ecolo... Get out of my room. *Sniff*

Ecolo: huh? why exactly?

Ringo: Because I'm gonna be sick more...

Ringo: *AAACHOOOOO*

Ecolo: ...I better leave...

I feel bad for Ringo. I wonder how the story is like if Amitie is the one being ill and whose story tells about it?
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Sun Mar 04, 2018 8:37 pm
Does Anyone remember this? Which i found Recently from this topic of Puyonexus?

Here's another:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: Bless you, Chico.

Chico: Thank you, Amitie. Umm, why is that boy in blue staring in this direction?

Amitie: Oh, that's Klug. He's the local genius and is sometimes insufferable about it.

Klug: (blushing) I can't believe that I saw that.

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Klug's blush, he got an inadvertent peek! I'll deal with him later, right now you're the one who will have to suffer!

This was posted by PuyoSturm and i'd like to suggest an alteration like this.

PuyoSturm, Here is my version of your scene:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School (Altered by me)

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: *Sees the upskirts and then* UUGH!! (In Fatal Pain on her head)

Chico: Amitie?! What Happened?

Amitie: aagh.... I.... Whenever i saw.... those things happen to a girl.... my head..... Eeerh....

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Amitie's Pain, At this rate She will get an Electroshock on her Legs if she kept seeing that Too many Times! For the Sake of AMitie's Life, you're the one who will have to suffer!
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wilsonasmara wrote:Does Anyone remember this? Which i found Recently from this topic of Puyonexus?

Here's another:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: Bless you, Chico.

Chico: Thank you, Amitie. Umm, why is that boy in blue staring in this direction?

Amitie: Oh, that's Klug. He's the local genius and is sometimes insufferable about it.

Klug: (blushing) I can't believe that I saw that.

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Klug's blush, he got an inadvertent peek! I'll deal with him later, right now you're the one who will have to suffer!

This was posted by PuyoSturm and i'd like to suggest an alteration like this.

PuyoSturm, Here is my version of your scene:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School (Altered by me)

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: *Sees the upskirts and then* UUGH!! (In Fatal Pain on her head)

Chico: Amitie?! What Happened?

Amitie: aagh.... I.... Whenever i saw.... those things happen to a girl.... my head..... Eeerh....

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Amitie's Pain, At this rate She will get an Electroshock on her Legs if she kept seeing that Too many Times! For the Sake of AMitie's Life, you're the one who will have to suffer!

I apologize, but your requested alteration is denied. Chico mistook Klug's purple as blue which is explained in the next stage after it so it would require editing at least three scenes instead of only one.
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Mon Mar 05, 2018 4:32 am
PuyoSturm wrote:
wilsonasmara wrote:Does Anyone remember this? Which i found Recently from this topic of Puyonexus?

Here's another:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: Bless you, Chico.

Chico: Thank you, Amitie. Umm, why is that boy in blue staring in this direction?

Amitie: Oh, that's Klug. He's the local genius and is sometimes insufferable about it.

Klug: (blushing) I can't believe that I saw that.

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Klug's blush, he got an inadvertent peek! I'll deal with him later, right now you're the one who will have to suffer!

This was posted by PuyoSturm and i'd like to suggest an alteration like this.

PuyoSturm, Here is my version of your scene:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School (Altered by me)

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: *Sees the upskirts and then* UUGH!! (In Fatal Pain on her head)

Chico: Amitie?! What Happened?

Amitie: aagh.... I.... Whenever i saw.... those things happen to a girl.... my head..... Eeerh....

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Amitie's Pain, At this rate She will get an Electroshock on her Legs if she kept seeing that Too many Times! For the Sake of AMitie's Life, you're the one who will have to suffer!

I apologize, but your requested alteration is denied. Chico mistook Klug's purple as blue which is explained in the next stage after it so it would require editing at least three scenes instead of only one.

If you want, i can do it for you. Just need help.

If you don't want to, i will just let it fly away. I am just sharing my point of view of how Amitie sees an upskirts of a girl before she was reborn.
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wilsonasmara wrote:
PuyoSturm wrote:
wilsonasmara wrote:Does Anyone remember this? Which i found Recently from this topic of Puyonexus?

Here's another:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: Bless you, Chico.

Chico: Thank you, Amitie. Umm, why is that boy in blue staring in this direction?

Amitie: Oh, that's Klug. He's the local genius and is sometimes insufferable about it.

Klug: (blushing) I can't believe that I saw that.

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Klug's blush, he got an inadvertent peek! I'll deal with him later, right now you're the one who will have to suffer!

This was posted by PuyoSturm and i'd like to suggest an alteration like this.

PuyoSturm, Here is my version of your scene:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School (Altered by me)

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: *Sees the upskirts and then* UUGH!! (In Fatal Pain on her head)

Chico: Amitie?! What Happened?

Amitie: aagh.... I.... Whenever i saw.... those things happen to a girl.... my head..... Eeerh....

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Amitie's Pain, At this rate She will get an Electroshock on her Legs if she kept seeing that Too many Times! For the Sake of AMitie's Life, you're the one who will have to suffer!

I apologize, but your requested alteration is denied. Chico mistook Klug's purple as blue which is explained in the next stage after it so it would require editing at least three scenes instead of only one.

If you want, i can do it for you. Just need help.

If you don't want to, i will just let it fly away. I am just sharing my point of view of how Amitie sees an upskirts of a girl before she was reborn.

I guess that it will fly to the leaden sky. That being said, you could use this idea in the PP8 Ideas topic.
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Mon Mar 05, 2018 4:59 am
PuyoSturm wrote:
wilsonasmara wrote:
PuyoSturm wrote:
wilsonasmara wrote:Does Anyone remember this? Which i found Recently from this topic of Puyonexus?

Here's another:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: Bless you, Chico.

Chico: Thank you, Amitie. Umm, why is that boy in blue staring in this direction?

Amitie: Oh, that's Klug. He's the local genius and is sometimes insufferable about it.

Klug: (blushing) I can't believe that I saw that.

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Klug's blush, he got an inadvertent peek! I'll deal with him later, right now you're the one who will have to suffer!

This was posted by PuyoSturm and i'd like to suggest an alteration like this.

PuyoSturm, Here is my version of your scene:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School (Altered by me)

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: *Sees the upskirts and then* UUGH!! (In Fatal Pain on her head)

Chico: Amitie?! What Happened?

Amitie: aagh.... I.... Whenever i saw.... those things happen to a girl.... my head..... Eeerh....

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Amitie's Pain, At this rate She will get an Electroshock on her Legs if she kept seeing that Too many Times! For the Sake of AMitie's Life, you're the one who will have to suffer!

I apologize, but your requested alteration is denied. Chico mistook Klug's purple as blue which is explained in the next stage after it so it would require editing at least three scenes instead of only one.

If you want, i can do it for you. Just need help.

If you don't want to, i will just let it fly away. I am just sharing my point of view of how Amitie sees an upskirts of a girl before she was reborn.

I guess that it will fly to the leaden sky. That being said, you could use this idea in the PP8 Ideas topic.

How about this?

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School (Altered by me)

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: *Sees the upskirts and then* UUGH!! (In Fatal Pain on her head)

Chico: Amitie?! What Happened?

Amitie: aagh.... I.... Whenever i saw.... those things happen to a girl.... my head..... Eeerh....

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Amitie's Pain, At this rate She will get an Electroshock on her Legs if she kept seeing that Too many Times! For the Sake of Amitie's Life, you're the one who will have to suffer!

Post Match of Last-5

Klug: I came as soon as you called, Raffina!

Raffina: Thank goodness. You'll be fine, Amitie.

Amitie: *in a weak voice* Thanks.......

Chico: Who is this boy in Blue anyway?

Klug: Greetigs, My name is Klug. I am one of Amitie's friends. You might have problems too. Everyone, Please escort this tribal girl to Ms. Accord so she can diagnose the problem.

Arle, Ringo, Raffina, and Amitie: Ok!

Klug: Oh, Amitie, Don't look at anymore upskirts okay?

Amitie: i'm sorry....
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wilsonasmara wrote:
PuyoSturm wrote:
wilsonasmara wrote:
PuyoSturm wrote:
wilsonasmara wrote:Does Anyone remember this? Which i found Recently from this topic of Puyonexus?

Here's another:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: Bless you, Chico.

Chico: Thank you, Amitie. Umm, why is that boy in blue staring in this direction?

Amitie: Oh, that's Klug. He's the local genius and is sometimes insufferable about it.

Klug: (blushing) I can't believe that I saw that.

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Klug's blush, he got an inadvertent peek! I'll deal with him later, right now you're the one who will have to suffer!

This was posted by PuyoSturm and i'd like to suggest an alteration like this.

PuyoSturm, Here is my version of your scene:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School (Altered by me)

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: *Sees the upskirts and then* UUGH!! (In Fatal Pain on her head)

Chico: Amitie?! What Happened?

Amitie: aagh.... I.... Whenever i saw.... those things happen to a girl.... my head..... Eeerh....

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Amitie's Pain, At this rate She will get an Electroshock on her Legs if she kept seeing that Too many Times! For the Sake of AMitie's Life, you're the one who will have to suffer!

I apologize, but your requested alteration is denied. Chico mistook Klug's purple as blue which is explained in the next stage after it so it would require editing at least three scenes instead of only one.

If you want, i can do it for you. Just need help.

If you don't want to, i will just let it fly away. I am just sharing my point of view of how Amitie sees an upskirts of a girl before she was reborn.

I guess that it will fly to the leaden sky. That being said, you could use this idea in the PP8 Ideas topic.

How about this?

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School (Altered by me)

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: *Sees the upskirts and then* UUGH!! (In Fatal Pain on her head)

Chico: Amitie?! What Happened?

Amitie: aagh.... I.... Whenever i saw.... those things happen to a girl.... my head..... Eeerh....

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Amitie's Pain, At this rate She will get an Electroshock on her Legs if she kept seeing that Too many Times! For the Sake of Amitie's Life, you're the one who will have to suffer!

Post Match of Last-5

Klug: I came as soon as you called, Raffina!

Raffina: Thank goodness. You'll be fine, Amitie.

Amitie: *in a weak voice* Thanks.......

Chico: Who is this boy in Blue anyway?

Klug: Greetigs, My name is Klug. I am one of Amitie's friends. You might have problems too. Everyone, Please escort this tribal girl to Ms. Accord so she can diagnose the problem.

Arle, Ringo, Raffina, and Amitie: Ok!

Klug: Oh, Amitie, Don't look at anymore upskirts okay?

Amitie: i'm sorry....

I apologize, but the Last Story was the first thing I created and what's already on the archive is pretty much set in stone. Plus, I had Amitie deliberately ignore the upskirts in favor of being worried about Chico possibly coming down with a cold because that seems in-character for her.
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Mon Mar 05, 2018 6:52 am
PuyoSturm wrote:
wilsonasmara wrote:
PuyoSturm wrote:
wilsonasmara wrote:
PuyoSturm wrote:
wilsonasmara wrote:Does Anyone remember this? Which i found Recently from this topic of Puyonexus?

Here's another:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: Bless you, Chico.

Chico: Thank you, Amitie. Umm, why is that boy in blue staring in this direction?

Amitie: Oh, that's Klug. He's the local genius and is sometimes insufferable about it.

Klug: (blushing) I can't believe that I saw that.

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Klug's blush, he got an inadvertent peek! I'll deal with him later, right now you're the one who will have to suffer!

This was posted by PuyoSturm and i'd like to suggest an alteration like this.

PuyoSturm, Here is my version of your scene:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School (Altered by me)

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: *Sees the upskirts and then* UUGH!! (In Fatal Pain on her head)

Chico: Amitie?! What Happened?

Amitie: aagh.... I.... Whenever i saw.... those things happen to a girl.... my head..... Eeerh....

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Amitie's Pain, At this rate She will get an Electroshock on her Legs if she kept seeing that Too many Times! For the Sake of AMitie's Life, you're the one who will have to suffer!

I apologize, but your requested alteration is denied. Chico mistook Klug's purple as blue which is explained in the next stage after it so it would require editing at least three scenes instead of only one.

If you want, i can do it for you. Just need help.

If you don't want to, i will just let it fly away. I am just sharing my point of view of how Amitie sees an upskirts of a girl before she was reborn.

I guess that it will fly to the leaden sky. That being said, you could use this idea in the PP8 Ideas topic.

How about this?

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School (Altered by me)

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: *Sees the upskirts and then* UUGH!! (In Fatal Pain on her head)

Chico: Amitie?! What Happened?

Amitie: aagh.... I.... Whenever i saw.... those things happen to a girl.... my head..... Eeerh....

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Amitie's Pain, At this rate She will get an Electroshock on her Legs if she kept seeing that Too many Times! For the Sake of Amitie's Life, you're the one who will have to suffer!

Post Match of Last-5

Klug: I came as soon as you called, Raffina!

Raffina: Thank goodness. You'll be fine, Amitie.

Amitie: *in a weak voice* Thanks.......

Chico: Who is this boy in Blue anyway?

Klug: Greetigs, My name is Klug. I am one of Amitie's friends. You might have problems too. Everyone, Please escort this tribal girl to Ms. Accord so she can diagnose the problem.

Arle, Ringo, Raffina, and Amitie: Ok!

Klug: Oh, Amitie, Don't look at anymore upskirts okay?

Amitie: i'm sorry....

I apologize, but the Last Story was the first thing I created and what's already on the archive is pretty much set in stone. Plus, I had Amitie deliberately ignore the upskirts in favor of being worried about Chico possibly coming down with a cold because that seems in-character for her.

It's fine. I guess i am not cut out to help this 30th anniversary.
If it is okay with you, can i make My own Puyo Fandom about Amitie's new adventure?
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Sure. You can do so. Make sure to give it its own topic.
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Mon Mar 05, 2018 12:17 pm
wilsonasmara wrote:
PuyoSturm wrote:
wilsonasmara wrote:
PuyoSturm wrote:
wilsonasmara wrote:
PuyoSturm wrote:
wilsonasmara wrote:Does Anyone remember this? Which i found Recently from this topic of Puyonexus?

Here's another:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: Bless you, Chico.

Chico: Thank you, Amitie. Umm, why is that boy in blue staring in this direction?

Amitie: Oh, that's Klug. He's the local genius and is sometimes insufferable about it.

Klug: (blushing) I can't believe that I saw that.

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Klug's blush, he got an inadvertent peek! I'll deal with him later, right now you're the one who will have to suffer!

This was posted by PuyoSturm and i'd like to suggest an alteration like this.

PuyoSturm, Here is my version of your scene:

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School (Altered by me)

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: *Sees the upskirts and then* UUGH!! (In Fatal Pain on her head)

Chico: Amitie?! What Happened?

Amitie: aagh.... I.... Whenever i saw.... those things happen to a girl.... my head..... Eeerh....

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Amitie's Pain, At this rate She will get an Electroshock on her Legs if she kept seeing that Too many Times! For the Sake of AMitie's Life, you're the one who will have to suffer!

I apologize, but your requested alteration is denied. Chico mistook Klug's purple as blue which is explained in the next stage after it so it would require editing at least three scenes instead of only one.

If you want, i can do it for you. Just need help.

If you don't want to, i will just let it fly away. I am just sharing my point of view of how Amitie sees an upskirts of a girl before she was reborn.

I guess that it will fly to the leaden sky. That being said, you could use this idea in the PP8 Ideas topic.

How about this?

Last-5 Scene Setting: Primp Town Magic School (Altered by me)

Chico: This certainly is new to me. I learned all of my magic from my parents and grandparents.

Amitie: So you were essentially homeschooled. That's new to me. You could still come by every now and then to socialize with us.

Arle: Some people like Amitie are quite nice. Ms. Accord has secrets and Tarutaru is very friendly. Raffina though... you'll see for yourself.

Raffina: Oh my, seems that someone new is here with Amitie. Hmm...

Chico: My name is Chico. Who are you?

Raffina: The name's Raffina. I fully admit this, I can be a really mean bi-

Amitie: Raffina!

Raffina: (sigh) I'm just being honest here.

Amitie: That doesn't give you the right to use such foul language!

Chico: (sniff) Uh oh, a sneeze is coming.

Ringo: Oh dear...

Chico: Ahhh... Ahhh... AACCHHOOO!!! (covers her mouth with one of her arms as she sneezes, not realizing that she used a spell)

Arle, Raffina, and Ringo: (hold down their skirts as a gust of wind blows by) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!

Amitie: *Sees the upskirts and then* UUGH!! (In Fatal Pain on her head)

Chico: Amitie?! What Happened?

Amitie: aagh.... I.... Whenever i saw.... those things happen to a girl.... my head..... Eeerh....

Raffina: That's it, it's time for a Puyo Puyo match Chico!

Chico: Why are you so interested in a match right now? I only sneezed.

Raffina: That sneeze also kicked up a gust that blew my skirt upward! And judging by Amitie's Pain, At this rate She will get an Electroshock on her Legs if she kept seeing that Too many Times! For the Sake of Amitie's Life, you're the one who will have to suffer!

Post Match of Last-5

Klug: I came as soon as you called, Raffina!

Raffina: Thank goodness. You'll be fine, Amitie.

Amitie: *in a weak voice* Thanks.......

Chico: Who is this boy in Blue anyway?

Klug: Greetigs, My name is Klug. I am one of Amitie's friends. You might have problems too. Everyone, Please escort this tribal girl to Ms. Accord so she can diagnose the problem.

Arle, Ringo, Raffina, and Amitie: Ok!

Klug: Oh, Amitie, Don't look at anymore upskirts okay?

Amitie: i'm sorry....

I apologize, but the Last Story was the first thing I created and what's already on the archive is pretty much set in stone. Plus, I had Amitie deliberately ignore the upskirts in favor of being worried about Chico possibly coming down with a cold because that seems in-character for her.

It's fine. I guess i am not cut out to help this 30th anniversary.
If it is okay with you, can i make My own Puyo Fandom about Amitie's new adventure?

well I would recomend making a new topic for it!

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Sorry for being late, I'm having some time stolen from me, So I'm not free, But I will post this:

Ecolo's Story mode Stage 3- Ecolo vs Sig - Primp town - the forest

Ecolo: ...

Ecolo: Guess I have to wait until Ringo gets better.

Ecolo: But in this meantime, what should I do...?

Sig: ...?

Sig: ...Is that a new bug?

Ecolo: Speaking of which...

Ecolo: Hello there! want to have some fun?

Sig: Does it have to do with bugs?

Ecolo: Of course, Of Course! It'll be fun playing Puyos with bugs!

Sig: ...Wait, You want to torture my ladybug with Puyos?

Sig: ...I won't let you do that!

Ecolo: This would be Indeed fun!

After the fight

Sig: *Angry Sig Sound*

Ecolo: That was Indeed fun!

Ecolo: ...

Ecolo: Hm...

Ecolo: I have a feeling... Like there's something weird across that dimension...

Ecolo: Maybe I should check it out, Maybe there's something out there.

Sig: ...He disappeared.

Sig: Now where I can find bugs here...?
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YukaPuyo wrote:Sorry for being late, I'm having some time stolen from me, So I'm not free, But I will post this:

Ecolo's Story mode Stage 3- Ecolo vs Sig - Primp town - the forest

Ecolo: ...

Ecolo: Guess I have to wait until Ringo gets better.

Ecolo: But in this meantime, what should I do...?

Sig: ...?

Sig: ...Is that a new bug?

Ecolo: Speaking of which...

Ecolo: Hello there! want to have some fun?

Sig: Does it have to do with bugs?

Ecolo: Of course, Of Course! It'll be fun playing Puyos with bugs!

Sig: ...Wait, You want to torture my ladybug with Puyos?

Sig: ...I won't let you do that!

Ecolo: This would be Indeed fun!

After the fight

Sig: *Angry Sig Sound*

Ecolo: That was Indeed fun!

Ecolo: ...

Ecolo: Hm...

Ecolo: I have a feeling... Like there's something weird across that dimension...

Ecolo: Maybe I should check it out, Maybe there's something out there.

Sig: ...He disappeared.

Sig: Now where I can find bugs here...?
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Ecolo's story mode Stage 4- Ecolo vs Satan - puyo puyo sun island the castle

Ecolo: hm... I'm pretty much sure I sensed something there.

Ecolo: maybe I was just Imaging stuff... But something's off.

Satan: Huh, it's just Ecolo.

Ecolo: Oh, its just Pops!

Satan: Were you the one who was stalking me again?

Ecolo: Huh? Well, I thought I sensed something from YOU.

Satan: So you won't admit that you are the who's stalking me.

Ecolo: what's with you pops! I just got here!

Satan: Stop lying! Because I will punish you in puyo hell!

After the fight

Ecolo: See? I told you I'm not stalking you!

Satan: Hm... Well I'll apologize to this time, anyway, what brings you here?

Ecolo: I just sensed something weird and I came here to see what it is.

Ecolo: Does that mean it has to do something to this.

Satan: *Princely laugh*

Satan: Because me and early are gonna make our honeymoon to this sunny and beautiful day.

Ecolo: So that was it...

Ecolo: Well, I'll go for now...
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YukaPuyo wrote:Ecolo's story mode Stage 4- Ecolo vs Satan - puyo puyo sun island the castle

Ecolo: hm... I'm pretty much sure I sensed something there.

Ecolo: maybe I was just Imaging stuff... But something's off.

Satan: Huh, it's just Ecolo.

Ecolo: Oh, its just Pops!

Satan: Were you the one who was stalking me again?

Ecolo: Huh? Well, I thought I sensed something from YOU.

Satan: So you won't admit that you are the who's stalking me.

Ecolo: what's with you pops! I just got here!

Satan: Stop lying! Because I will punish you in puyo hell!

After the fight

Ecolo: See? I told you I'm not stalking you!

Satan: Hm... Well I'll apologize to this time, anyway, what brings you here?

Ecolo: I just sensed something weird and I came here to see what it is.

Ecolo: Does that mean it has to do something to this.

Satan: *Princely laugh*

Satan: Because me and early are gonna make our honeymoon to this sunny and beautiful day.

Ecolo: So that was it...

Ecolo: Well, I'll go for now...
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Ecolo's Story Stage 5 - Ecolo Vs Amitie - Puyo Puyo Sun Island - the forest.

Ecolo: That was reaally lame if you ask me.

Ecolo: But that's Weird... Why it comes that feeling that someone is still following me?

Amitie: Ah! I thought it was a ghost for a second.

Ecolo: Well, Hello there, Amitie! Who is actually Ringo's Friend.

Amitie: ...uh, how did you know my name?

Amitie: and who are you?

Ecolo: Well, This is Okay to forget me, But OF course I know you are Ringo's Friend!

Amitie: This thing is really weird...

Ecolo: You see me as "Weird"?

Ecolo: Well, Wait for me for a minute!

Amitie: He left, What was that all about?

Unusual Ecolo: Well, How about that?

Amitie: Ah! It almost scared me.

Amitie: But you actually look cool and stuff, But I still can't tell you are like a human or not.

Unusual Ecolo: ...Looks like the plan to make myself look like a human and surprise Ringo by this has been failed...

Amitie: G-Get real, Of course, you look like a human.

Amitie: But, what am I talking about is that drooling ghost behind you.

Unusual Ecolo: ...Oh?

Ecolo: Well, It failed again, Looks like I need to hold this for later.

Ecolo: But well, How about we have a Puyo match?

Amitie: O-Okay then, if you say so...

After the fight

Ecolo: That was really fun!

Ecolo: Did you have fun too?

Amitie: Yeah, I guess so...?

Ecolo: Well, That's it for now.

Ecolo: Now to say what is my name, My name is...

Amitie: Okay...?

Ecolo:...

Ecolo: Okay then I have to go.

Amitie: ...He went away.

Amitie: Gee, I wonder what was that all about...?
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YukaPuyo wrote:Ecolo's Story Stage 5 - Ecolo Vs Amitie - Puyo Puyo Sun Island - the forest.

Ecolo: That was reaally lame if you ask me.

Ecolo: But that's Weird... Why it comes that feeling that someone is still following me?

Amitie: Ah! I thought it was a ghost for a second.

Ecolo: Well, Hello there, Amitie! Who is actually Ringo's Friend.

Amitie: ...uh, how did you know my name?

Amitie: and who are you?

Ecolo: Well, This is Okay to forget me, But OF course I know you are Ringo's Friend!

Amitie: This thing is really weird...

Ecolo: You see me as "Weird"?

Ecolo: Well, Wait for me for a minute!

Amitie: He left, What was that all about?

Unusual Ecolo: Well, How about that?

Amitie: Ah! It almost scared me.

Amitie: But you actually look cool and stuff, But I still can't tell you are like a human or not.

Unusual Ecolo: ...Looks like the plan to make myself look like a human and surprise Ringo by this has been failed...

Amitie: G-Get real, Of course, you look like a human.

Amitie: But, what am I talking about is that drooling ghost behind you.

Unusual Ecolo: ...Oh?

Ecolo: Well, It failed again, Looks like I need to hold this for later.

Ecolo: But well, How about we have a Puyo match?

Amitie: O-Okay then, if you say so...

After the fight

Ecolo: That was really fun!

Ecolo: Did you have fun too?

Amitie: Yeah, I guess so...?

Ecolo: Well, That's it for now.

Ecolo: Now to say what is my name, My name is...

Amitie: Okay...?

Ecolo:...

Ecolo: Okay then I have to go.

Amitie: ...He went away.

Amitie: Gee, I wonder what was that all about...?
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So, this is a deserted forum I guess. So everyone finished up all their ideas?

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No, I think everyone's either got writer's block and/or are doing other things.
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monkeypuyo wrote:Let's continue Puyo Puyo 30th now!

Archive: https://pp30tharchive.tumblr.com/

Guys since Tumblr is committing suicide thanks to the guideline changes & false flagging I may just have to move Puyo Puyo 30th to Blogspot

https://twitter.com/kiwikamikaze/status/1069680639761244161
https://twitter.com/_lulles_/status/1069696995336617984
https://twitter.com/MacaHeroes/status/1069797467003281409
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It's mostly false positive flagging, trolls might try to shut the site down too; the 30th stuff could be moved here too.


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So... since anyone is not continuing a character, maybe I might continue it then. If anyone didn't do Yu and Rei, I might as well do it then. And somehow, solo Yu and solo Rei can comply with this story. So that means, I'll write up the story for them. Now all I need is to think of 8 stages.

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PuyoSturm wrote:It's mostly false positive flagging, trolls might try to shut the site down too; the 30th stuff could be moved here too.

Yeah I have experience with Blogger before mainly with my ask my OC blog
https://askarcade.blogspot.com/

DylanTheProGamer wrote:So... since anyone is not continuing a character, maybe I might continue it then. If anyone didn't do Yu and Rei, I might as well do it then. And somehow, solo Yu and solo Rei can comply with this story. So that means, I'll write up the story for them. Now all I need is to think of 8 stages.

Yeah you could do that but first let's move the existing stuff to blogger first

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Ok everyone the blogger is up

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I'm alright with Dylan continuing things. I would just recommend talking to people before starting on character stories that already have progress but were stopped for one reason or another. For example, you would have to talk to YukaPuyo if you want to continue Ecolo's story.
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PuyoSturm wrote:I'm alright with Dylan continuing things. I would just recommend talking to people before starting on character stories that already have progress but were stopped for one reason or another. For example, you would have to talk to YukaPuyo if you want to continue Ecolo's story.

Yeah! ok!

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but before we continue I need to ask something

How are we going to connect the Madou, Fever & Surzan stories to the final story?

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monkeypuyo wrote:but before we continue I need to ask something

How are we going to connect the Madou, Fever & Surzan stories to the final story?

Now that I think about it, maybe the 'True Final' story we currently have would better serve as an 'Intro Story' so to speak so a new 'True Final' story can be created.
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monkeypuyo wrote:but before we continue I need to ask something

How are we going to connect the Madou, Fever & Surzan stories to the final story?

Now that I think about it, maybe the 'True Final' story we currently have would better serve as an 'Intro Story' so to speak so a new 'True Final' story can be created.

yeah, I see... But this final story is so ingrained into Puyo Puyo 30th that changing it would be too risky

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PuyoSturm wrote:
monkeypuyo wrote:but before we continue I need to ask something

How are we going to connect the Madou, Fever & Surzan stories to the final story?

Now that I think about it, maybe the 'True Final' story we currently have would better serve as an 'Intro Story' so to speak so a new 'True Final' story can be created.

yeah, I see... But this final story is so ingrained into Puyo Puyo 30th that changing it would be too risky

True. Hang on, I just got an idea... we rename what is currently the 'True Final' story into the 'First Final' story and it has to be cleared before the Madou, Fever, and Suzuran Final stories are unlocked.
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PuyoSturm wrote:
monkeypuyo wrote:
PuyoSturm wrote:
monkeypuyo wrote:but before we continue I need to ask something

How are we going to connect the Madou, Fever & Surzan stories to the final story?

Now that I think about it, maybe the 'True Final' story we currently have would better serve as an 'Intro Story' so to speak so a new 'True Final' story can be created.

yeah, I see... But this final story is so ingrained into Puyo Puyo 30th that changing it would be too risky

True. Hang on, I just got an idea... we rename what is currently the 'True Final' story into the 'First Final' story and it has to be cleared before the Madou, Fever, and Suzuran Final stories are unlocked.

Ok one problem... We already wrote the Fever final to connect to the True final

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Oh dear... it seems that we may need to go back to the drawing board or start from scratch for the final stories, neither of which would be something that we would want to do.
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PuyoSturm wrote:Oh dear... it seems that we may need to go back to the drawing board or start from scratch for the final stories, neither of which would be something that we would want to do.

Yeah keep the main stories for characters (regular and DLC)

But start the Finalises from scratch & make an intro story

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Good idea. We could keep those two Final Stories we already have around but mark them as 'Beta Content' so people know that they are the old versions.
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PuyoSturm wrote:Good idea. We could keep those two Final Stories we already have around but mark them as 'Beta Content' so people know that they are the old versions.

Ok!

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Tue Dec 04, 2018 8:52 pm
Never mind about what I said with 8 stages, I'll put 10 instead. I saw Ringo's and it had 10.

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Tue Dec 04, 2018 9:26 pm
So I prepared the 1st stage for Yu & Rei's story:

Stage 1- Yu & Rei vs Raffina - PP20th Graveyard.

Raffina: Oh great! I just entered the graveyard by mistake.

Raffina: Well hopefully I don't see those annoying ghosts again.

*appearance of Yu & Rei*

Yu: You rang?

Raffina: What do you know! It happened about what I said that I didn't want it to happen.

Yu: Introducing your hosts! Yu...

Rei: And Rei.

Raffina: Look here you noisy ghosts, I don't have time to play your ghostly quiz.

Yu: Quiz? No you silly, we as hosts are going to do a dance!

Rei: A dance exercise Yu, not just a dance.

Raffina: A dance exercise? You ghosts don't have weight, this doesn't make any sense.

Yu: And without further ado, let's start the dance exercise!

Yu: Pay attention to my elegant dancing steps!

Raffina: Good luck dancing without any legs!

Raffina: (Hmm... I think I said this before.)

After the fight

Raffina: What am I even doing now? I don't have time to dawdle around like this.

Raffina: Interesting dance exercise! But, I must be leaving now. Hopefully, I don't remember what I practised from you ghosts.

Raffina: Ha ha ha! Oh la-ti-da!

*Raffina Leaves*

Yu: Hope you enjoyed our act! Sincerely from your hosts, Yu...

Rei: And Rei.

Rei: Hmm... I don't think she will remember our dance exercise.

Yu: Nonsense Rei! She definitely will remember!

Rei: Maybe. I wonder who our next person will be...

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Wed Dec 05, 2018 12:10 pm
DylanTheProGamer wrote:So I prepared the 1st stage for Yu & Rei's story:

Stage 1- Yu & Rei vs Raffina - PP20th Graveyard.

Raffina: Oh great! I just entered the graveyard by mistake.

Raffina: Well hopefully I don't see those annoying ghosts again.

*appearance of Yu & Rei*

Yu: You rang?

Raffina: What do you know! It happened about what I said that I didn't want it to happen.

Yu: Introducing your hosts! Yu...

Rei: And Rei.

Raffina: Look here you noisy ghosts, I don't have time to play your ghostly quiz.

Yu: Quiz? No you silly, we as hosts are going to do a dance!

Rei: A dance exercise Yu, not just a dance.

Raffina: A dance exercise? You ghosts don't have weight, this doesn't make any sense.

Yu: And without further ado, let's start the dance exercise!

Yu: Pay attention to my elegant dancing steps!

Raffina: Good luck dancing without any legs!

Raffina: (Hmm... I think I said this before.)

After the fight

Raffina: What am I even doing now? I don't have time to dawdle around like this.

Raffina: Interesting dance exercise! But, I must be leaving now. Hopefully, I don't remember what I practised from you ghosts.

Raffina: Ha ha ha! Oh la-ti-da!

*Raffina Leaves*

Yu: Hope you enjoyed our act! Sincerely from your hosts, Yu...

Rei: And Rei.

Rei: Hmm... I don't think she will remember our dance exercise.

Yu: Nonsense Rei! She definitely will remember!

Rei: Maybe. I wonder who our next person will be...

Great!

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Wed Dec 05, 2018 12:58 pm
DLC idea

Puyo Puyo E-sports Pack (Connect your Copy of Puyo Puyo E-Sports game with Puyo Puyo 30th)

Hed
Sultana
Ciel
Penglai
Seriri
Hartmann
Alex

And Ally (Alt Lovestruck Ally) & Rasolf will be a part of the main cast

(This will be the final characters we add until we get 90% of the stories done)


Last edited by monkeypuyo on Wed Dec 05, 2018 1:11 pm; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : some are DLC already and Ally should be with the main cast)

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Wed Dec 05, 2018 2:16 pm
I prepared the 2nd stage for Yu & Rei's story:

Stage 2- Yu & Rei vs Feli - PP20th Graveyard.

Yu: Welcome to our ghostly quiz!

Yu: Introducing your hosts! Yu...

Rei: And Rei.

Feli: I sense your future, and it's terrible!

Yu: Eh? Our future? We're not thinking of one.

Rei: None of us is thinking of the future.

Feli: Are you sure? I can sense it, it's dangerous! The danger is coming your way!

Yu: Hahaha! Very funny! That's a good joke!

Rei: Umm... That wasn't a joke.

Feli: Exactly! I suggest you think before something bad happens!

Rei: Neither your non-joke nor what you said makes sense.

*Feli turns crazy*

Feli: Then so be it! Your doom is sealed!

Feli: You made your decision! So, your worst is coming! It's bad, worse than you think!

Feli: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Yu: Hahaha! Your scream is funny! It's a ghostly comedy!

Yu: You know what, let's have a Puyo battle! I'm enjoying so much that I want to enjoy this more!

Rei: Come, let's have a Puyo battle.

After the fight

Yu: Yay! We won!

Rei: Yes Yu, we won.

Feli: Hmph! If you can't understand a word I said, then I can't deal with you!

Feli: I'll be leaving now! Just remember this, you have been warned!

*Feli leaves*

Yu: Thanks for your ghostly comedy! Sincerely, Yu...

Rei: And Rei.

Yu: That was a very funny event we experienced! What do you think Rei?

Rei: Yes. I wonder who our...

*a light appears in front of Yu & Rei*

Yu: Hmm? What's this light?

Rei: That light is getting bigger!

Yu: Uh oh! It's coming our way!

Rei: Well, at least we learnt a lesson from that dark lady.

*light gets 100% bigger*

Yu: Too bright!

Rei: Can't see a thing.

*light engulfs Yu & Rei*

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Puyo Puyo 20th Anniversary (3DS) (CIA-Based)
Puyo Pop Fever - Puyo Puyo 7 (All DS) (Flashcart)
Puyo Puyo SUN (PC)
Possible Flash Emulated Puyo Games

My Friend Codes:

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Wed Dec 05, 2018 4:38 pm
DylanTheProGamer wrote:I prepared the 2nd stage for Yu & Rei's story:

Stage 2- Yu & Rei vs Feli - PP20th Graveyard.

Yu: Welcome to our ghostly quiz!

Yu: Introducing your hosts! Yu...

Rei: And Rei.

Feli: I sense your future, and it's terrible!

Yu: Eh? Our future? We're not thinking of one.

Rei: None of us is thinking of the future.

Feli: Are you sure? I can sense it, it's dangerous! The danger is coming your way!

Yu: Hahaha! Very funny! That's a good joke!

Rei: Umm... That wasn't a joke.

Feli: Exactly! I suggest you think before something bad happens!

Rei: Neither your non-joke nor what you said makes sense.

*Feli turns crazy*

Feli: Then so be it! Your doom is sealed!

Feli: You made your decision! So, your worst is coming! It's bad, worse than you think!

Feli: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Yu: Hahaha! Your scream is funny! It's a ghostly comedy!

Yu: You know what, let's have a Puyo battle! I'm enjoying so much that I want to enjoy this more!

Rei: Come, let's have a Puyo battle.

After the fight

Yu: Yay! We won!

Rei: Yes Yu, we won.

Feli: Hmph! If you can't understand a word I said, then I can't deal with you!

Feli: I'll be leaving now! Just remember this, you have been warned!

*Feli leaves*

Yu: Thanks for your ghostly comedy! Sincerely, Yu...

Rei: And Rei.

Yu: That was a very funny event we experienced! What do you think Rei?

Rei: Yes. I wonder who our...

*a light appears in front of Yu & Rei*

Yu: Hmm? What's this light?

Rei: That light is getting bigger!

Yu: Uh oh! It's coming our way!

Rei: Well, at least we learnt a lesson from that dark lady.

*light gets 100% bigger*

Yu: Too bright!

Rei: Can't see a thing.

*light engulfs Yu & Rei*

Great!

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